5. Reading Journal Blog "Recount and Empathy"
In your own words what happenend in the book? At any point of the story, retell the major details of the story`s plot so far.
After Eva had losed her job in "Milewards" she changed her name to Daisy Renton. The Inspector went out of the room with Eric to find Mr. Briling. Sheila Birling ask Gerald Croft why he knows this
name. Gerald tells then that he know her from the last summer but he hasn`t see the young woman for more than six months. He also says that Sheila and he should keep this knowledge for themselfs but Sheila refuses and says that the Inspector knows it already.
Words: 86
Choose an important Moment in the story for one of the charaters and write a diary entry for that character.
Sheila Birling:
I hate him. What`s going wrong in his brain by dating an other woman and tells me he had so much to work? And didn`t tell me one word of that, I thought I know him good. Yes one hour ealier I wanted to marry him! And the best is he thought that we could keep this scandalous infromation just beetween us. But I know that this Inspector Google already knows everything and I think that`s good. We should say him everything we know and then everything will be a little bit easier. But in this moment I feel tired, very tired. I was really horrible to a young woman and now she`s death, the man I love and whitch I wanted to marry wasn`t honest to me and isn`t competent enough to admit his fault and I think the rest of my Family didn`t see a real face behind this story, they just think of themselfs!
Words: 175
I'm happy that in the second part you did something else than retelling the story again. The diary entry is good.
AntwortenLöschenAfter Eva had losed --> lost
but he hasn`t see --> but he hasn`t seen
What`s going wrong in his brain by dating --> what is wrong in his brain to make him date...
I thought I know him good. --> I thought I know him well.
We should say him everything --> We should tell him everything
themselfs --> themselves