3. Reading Journal Blog "Recount"
Question: List the ten most important things about the text you are reading.
In the room are now just Arthur Birling and Gerald Croft. They talks about the knighthood Arthur Birling will get soon and that then Lady Coft will like the whole Birling Family more. That would be better for the marriage of Sheila Briling and Gerald Croft. It rings on the door. Edna, the parlourmaid cames into the room and tells them that it`s an Inspector with the name "Google". The Inspector Google comes in, sit down and told them that a young woman, with the name Eva Smith, died in the Infirmary cause she swallowed disinfectant.
Google shows a picture to Arthur Birling. It turned out that Mr. Birling knows Eva Smith cause she worked in his Company two yeras ago.The Inspector wants to know what was going on with Eva in this time. Arthur Birling tells him that she was a good working and good looking young woman. Whitch should get the position of a leading operator. But after the holidays a group of worker wants to earn more Money than they earn bevor. Mr. Birling told them that they dindn`t get more Money and if this isnt`t okey for them they must leave his company. Eva Smith went then away.
Birling says that this is all he knows and the Inspector should leave now or he would speak with the Boss of the Inspector Google.
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Google shows a picture to Arthur Birling. It turned out that Mr. Birling knows Eva Smith cause she worked in his Company two yeras ago.The Inspector wants to know what was going on with Eva in this time. Arthur Birling tells him that she was a good working and good looking young woman. Whitch should get the position of a leading operator. But after the holidays a group of worker wants to earn more Money than they earn bevor. Mr. Birling told them that they dindn`t get more Money and if this isnt`t okey for them they must leave his company. Eva Smith went then away.
Birling says that this is all he knows and the Inspector should leave now or he would speak with the Boss of the Inspector Google.
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This is a nice summary of the part you read there, but you don't "list the ten most important things about the text you are reading" --> there I mean in general. What is the most important thing about the whole book? However, it's ok. You don't have to rewrite it or so.
AntwortenLöschenActually the inspector is called Goole, not Google :)
The Inspector Google comes in, sit down and told them that a young woman, with the name Eva Smith, died in the Infirmary cause she swallowed disinfectant. --> pay attention to tenses. You switch from present to past while talking about a string of action happening one after the other. Also take care with the final -s for third person singular (Goole sitS down)
Google shows a picture to Arthur Birling. It turned out that ---> again, tenses!
she was a good working and good looking young woman. Whitch should get the position of a leading operator. --> "Which" not "Whitch". But actually it should be "who" (who for people, which for things)